#FeedbackFriday #LandingPageReview 🚀
Hey, everyone!
Exciting news – my iOS app hit the $1,000 revenue mark last month! 🎉 To keep the momentum going, I’ve put together a new landing page for KikoCard. Check it out here: https://kikocard.com/
KikoCard helps creators design stunning social posts with plain text. But here’s the thing – I’m struggling with the copywriting. Can you help me out?
🔍 Take a look and let me know:
– Is the value of the app clearly conveyed in the copywriting?
– Do you spot anything that needs tweaking?
– What suggestions do you have for enhancing the overall experience?
Your feedback is gold to me! And as a token of my appreciation, I’ll give you a premium access code if you find the tool useful after reviewing it. 🔑
Thank you in advance for your insights! 🌟
Hi There!
I think your landing page looks good, nothing to roast, congrats! Firstly, under your sub header that begins “Kiki card is a…” you do not need the comma after the word converter.
I would change some of the punctuation to make it sound more exciting. Everything ends with a period but there is a lot of exciting features on the platform that you could definitely emphasize with a simple tone shift by changing some of the punctuation.
The wall of text in the beginning is broken up well by the four steps and their visuals, but afterwards I feel that the text block could be a lot for a single person to digest. My suggestion here would be to have a 30 second video produced that simply highlights what your main strengths are, why they should buy, and a quick call to action.
I hope these suggestions were somewhat helpful, the app is super interesting and I could definitely see myself trying it. Cheers!